Draft

From our draft film we have found out that we need more close ups of different body parts of our characters.

We think this because at the moment our film isn't very fast paced all the way through how we'd like it to be. We really like part of the sequence when the two characters go up stairs then jump down because we did a lot of shot variety which works with the pace, we need to add more shot variety to get the tempo right for the film.

we need:

• Close up of Adam's eyes
• Close up of Rob's eyes
• Close up of Adam's feet
• Close up of Rob's feet
• Close up of bottle smashing
• Close up of Adam's face
• Close up of Rob's reaction
• Low angle shot of Adam jumping fence
• Low angle shot of Rob jumping fence
• Close up of Adam's arms while running
• Close up of Rob's arms while running.
• Reshoot the first focussing scene with the flower replacing the clown.